The story of a befuddled amnesiac running a gift store for the magically inclined, and the people who may or may not know his true identity

Saturday, December 5, 2009

That thing you do

Sterling! A force of nature. I've temporarily given up having Sterling speak in a different font. All the fonts I liked were too hard to read. I'm thinking of putting a gray band inside his word balloons to illustrate the voice.
Also the wording is so awkward. That's what I get for rewriting sections of already written script at 1:00 am.
It's not wretched mind you, just a few words here and there need changing. (I know what I'm doing tonight.) Read this now- then come back later to see the new improved version and compare.... I dare you.
Corrections made. Woo

No comments:

Post a Comment